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Hit me up dat bass son...

Doancha know I need mah medicine?

WE OLDFAGS NEED OUR FUNK, loosen up these rusty joints. :B

Very nice chaotic bass there. You kept the whole song loosely tied together there though, even more nice. Best of both worlds.

Wanna go somewhere?

ctgmusic.com
That's where all the pros hang out.
Keep name, or post in a journal here on NG, and we shall follow ye.

Alright, that's it...

Time for the lurkers to begin letting the gud musicians know they're gud.
The rabid monkies sure aren't going to inform you of your talent.

Gud beat.
Fair electronic addition.
Nice mastering.

The win is with this one.

Cheer up chap...

Most of us blokes with brains don't comment, rate, or anything; we just download what we like.

This is because we're picky, and we wade through a lot of songs, and don't want to take the time to stop and point out all the things we like or dislike.

You aren't alone, it's just that all the people like you and I FEEL alone because we just don't talk to the folks we should who are right beside us already.

Gud song, gud sah.
Gud day to ye.

JinNJuice responds:

I already figured there are hundreds of songs every day. I just feel lonely.

Wow.

There are SO MANY parts of this that could be used and sampled for... oh man.
IT LOOPS TOO! 8D

There are no words for this.

It's just amazing.

GodSpeedIam responds:

I'm glad you think so.

This was one of those rare 'single insturment' pieces that I thought was actually diverse enough to be interesting. The cresendo of extra slobber at the end really gets your pulse pounding.

Thank you for the kind review.

Not too bad...

Many people try,
many people fall.
Best advice for the new fry
is don't drop the ball.

It takes a lot of practice to get good, so try as many different things as you can. Do your best not to overuse samples (the "HEY!" in particular got old very quickly). If you use something at the beginning, and then bring in again at the end (as you did with the intro voice), that's fine. It often works well.

You already have a reasonable enough grasp of how to use the software, you're not going MAD WITH DRUMS RAAAAAAAGH, you aren't using annoying buzzing sounds... Hey, you've got a good start.

Keep working on tunes, try using as many different sounds as you can (while keeping the feel of the song), and experiment. Everything doesn't have to be catchy your first year or so, but JUST KEEP DOING STUFF. That's the only way.

I failed because although I could create catchy tunes, I couldn't dedicate enough time to keep on working on more tunes. Don't make that mistake!

THEICONICICON responds:

thanks man i apprreciate it!!!!!!!

AND GOOD MORNING TO YOU TOO GOOD SIR!

Composition is fairly good, good use maybe one or two small parts with more speed for some flavour, but otherwise is good.

The song overall is just a bit TOO LOUD. Try lowering the master volume, and then the bass too, just a little bit.

This piece is actually pretty catchy, but the first synth in the beginning is lame. SPICE DAT UP SON! : D
The second synth is better, but could use more feel. Make more grungy maybe...
Third synth is WONKY. Try using a different module there, something completely different.
Fourth; meh, that one's fine.
Fifth is TOO LOUD. D: Tweak it a bit, make each synth sound distinct from the others.

IS NOT SO BAD.
POTENTIAL IS IN THE AIR.
GOOD LUCK SIR, THE PORTAL CAN BE BRUTAL.

Snooglebum responds:

Wow, someone actually providing constructive criticism! I am shocked.

Yeah, most people who've heard it agree that the bass drum is too loud.

Thanks for the review!

Naot so bad nao...

This rating is given imagining your song performed live...

The grunge you've added could use some spicing up. Make it fluctuate a bit, or find a module that's less-used.
Piano/Violin sounds rather bland. Your composition itself is perfectly fine, but if you vary the speed/volume of the individual notes just a wee bit, the song would sound IMMENSELY better.

You mentioned in your bio that you can play some instruments. Do that here! : D

Again, 8 stars is given assuming those things were fixed.
No need in blamming a nice bloke who's got genuine potential. Amirite?

MOAR.

A lot of the Metal here is sub par.

This song, howevah, is relevant to my interests.

DON'T LEAVE US ALONE WITH ALL THE OTHER CRAP!
QUALITY SO TOO HARD TO FIND! D:

Its so incredibly bad...

Its good. This would indeed be great parody material.
That bit of voice at the end is BS though (you shouldn't have to add in credits for a song intended to be crap). Honestly, buddy. It just forces people to edit it out. :/

Otherwise, nice.

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